Just a little flaw I found, I think. On the second part, the line "but they don't know where they're going." I think in the song, the pitch goes a bit higher, then goes back down, at the word "going". So, personally, I thought you could maybe add a "c" note in there, so it would result in, "e flat, e flat, e flat, e flat, f, a flat, b flat, and c. (C natural) but, besides that, it was pretty good, thanks for posting this up, it gave me the chills when I played it!
Just a little flaw I found, I think. On the second part, the line "but they don't know where they're going." I think in the song, the pitch goes a bit higher, then goes back down, at the word "going". So, personally, I thought you could maybe add a "c" note in there, so it would result in, "e flat, e flat, e flat, e flat, f, a flat, b flat, and c. (C natural) but, besides that, it was pretty good, thanks for posting this up, it gave me the chills when I played it!
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ReplyDeletei feel like not should be a c natural in the line 'but that's not really her style" but other than that this is perfect
ReplyDeleteI don't think this song was your best, but all your other work is really cool.
ReplyDeleteCould you do "Tell her you love her" by Echosmith?
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